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Working in the family business: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu aileyle ilgili two-part essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many young people are expected to work in their family's business rather than choose their own career. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative situation?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Bu pratik sorusunu GoPrep sınav tarzında yazdı. Resmi bir IELTS sorusu değildir.

İki taraf için fikirler

Bir ya da iki sütundan iki üç nokta seç. Hepsine gerek yok; kendi örneklerin ezberlenmiş örneklerden daha çok puan getirir.

1. soru için fikirler

  • tradition and duty
  • a ready-made job
  • keeps wealth within the family

2. soru için fikirler

  • limits personal ambition and choice
  • conflicts between family and work life
  • may lack passion or skills

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce family business expectations
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Reasons - tradition, security, inheritance
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Evaluation - benefits versus loss of freedom
  4. 4SonuçConclusion with clear judgement

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

Cevabın yalnızca bu sayfada kalır. Sayfadan çıkmadan önce kopyala.

Band 8 örnek cevap

Önce kendi cevabını yaz, sonra karşılaştır: örnek cevap tam olarak bu soruyu nasıl yanıtlıyor, her paragraf ne işe yarıyor ve hangi ifadeleri kendine alabilirsin.

Örnek cevabı göster (302 kelime)

In many places, young people are expected to work in their family's business rather than choose their own career. This essay will explain why this expectation exists and argue that it is generally a negative situation.

There are several reasons for it. Family businesses are often built over generations, and parents hope to preserve what they have created and keep it in the family. The business is also a source of income and security, so relatives feel responsible for each other's livelihood. Young people who join gain a ready-made job, and in societies where unemployment is high this is attractive. In many cultures there is also a tradition of respect for family duty, which makes refusing difficult. Trust is another factor: owners may feel more confident in relatives than in outsiders, especially where legal protection is weak.

There are advantages for some individuals. They can learn directly from experienced relatives, take on responsibility early and perhaps inherit a successful enterprise. Family loyalty may also motivate them to work harder than ordinary employees.

However, I believe the drawbacks are greater. Young people who are pressured into a career they do not want may feel resentful and unfulfilled, and their talents in other fields, such as science or art, may be wasted. If they lack interest or ability, the business may suffer as well. Conflicts at work can spill over into family life, making personal disagreements harder to resolve. Moreover, young people lose the chance to experience different workplaces and develop independent skills.

A better approach is to let them decide freely, perhaps after gaining experience elsewhere, so that those who return do so by choice.

In conclusion, expectations to join the family firm arise from tradition, security and trust, but they restrict personal freedom and can harm both the individual and the business.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
family businesscompany owned by relatives
follow in someone's footstepsdo the same job as a relative
job securityassurance of keeping a job
personal fulfilmentsatisfaction from your own achievements
inheritreceive after someone dies or retires
successionpassing a role to the next person

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