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Editing human genes: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu bilimle ilgili advantages and disadvantages essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Scientists are able to change human genes to prevent serious inherited diseases.

Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Avantajlar

  • Could eliminate suffering from genetic disease
  • Reduces long-term healthcare costs
  • Gives families healthier futures

Dezavantajlar

  • Risk of unknown side effects
  • Could lead to designer babies and inequality
  • Ethical and religious concerns

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce gene editing
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Medical benefits
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Ethical and safety risks
  4. 4SonuçConclude on whether advantages outweigh disadvantages

Süreyle yaz

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40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (300 kelime)

Scientists can now change human genes to prevent serious inherited diseases. In my view the advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages, but only if it is strictly controlled.

The medical benefits are potentially enormous. Conditions such as cystic fibrosis, Huntington's disease and certain forms of blindness are caused by faulty genes, and correcting them before birth could spare individuals a lifetime of suffering and their families great emotional and financial hardship. Because the change can be passed to future generations, the disease could eventually be removed from a family line. Healthcare systems would also save money that is currently spent on long-term treatment. Early trials with adult patients, such as therapies for sickle cell disease, show that gene editing can work, and this offers hope for conditions with no current cure.

Nevertheless, the risks are serious. Editing may cause unintended mutations whose effects might not appear until later in life or in descendants, and mistakes would be irreversible. There are also profound ethical concerns. If the technology can prevent disease, it could also be used to select traits such as intelligence or appearance, creating so-called designer babies and widening the gap between wealthy families who can afford it and everyone else. Many people believe that humans should not interfere with the genetic code in this way, and an international scandal in 2018, when a scientist announced the birth of edited babies, showed how quickly the technology can be misused.

These dangers argue for caution, not prohibition. Governments should limit gene editing to the prevention of severe illness, require rigorous safety testing and independent oversight, and ban its use for cosmetic enhancement.

In conclusion, gene editing offers a remarkable chance to end inherited diseases, and with strong regulation to prevent abuse, I believe its benefits are greater than its dangers.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
genetic disorderillness caused by genes
gene therapytreatment that changes genes
designer babieschildren whose traits are chosen
hereditary diseaseillness passed in families
ethical dilemmadifficult moral choice
medical advanceimprovement in treatment

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