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Tax on unhealthy food: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu sağlıkla ilgili opinion essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

The government should put a tax on unhealthy food and drinks to improve public health.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Katılmak için gerekçeler

  • Higher prices discourage consumption
  • Revenue can fund healthcare
  • Companies are pushed to reformulate products

Katılmamak için gerekçeler

  • It hits low-income families hardest
  • Education is more effective than taxes
  • People may switch to other cheap unhealthy foods

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişParaphrase and give your position
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1How taxes change behaviour and fund services
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Why taxes can be unfair or ineffective alone
  4. 4SonuçConclude with a firm view, ideally linking to education campaigns

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (272 kelime)

Some people argue that governments should tax unhealthy food and drinks to improve public health. I largely agree with this proposal, provided it is accompanied by other measures.

The strongest argument for such a tax is that price influences behaviour. When the cost of sugary drinks rises, many people buy less of them or choose healthier alternatives. The United Kingdom's soft drinks levy, for instance, led manufacturers to reduce the sugar in their recipes to avoid paying it, so consumers benefited even without changing their habits. The revenue can also be used to fund health services or to provide cheaper fruit and vegetables in schools, which helps offset the cost of illnesses such as diabetes and heart disease that place a heavy burden on public budgets.

Nevertheless, there are fair objections. Taxes on food fall hardest on low-income households, who spend a larger share of their earnings on groceries and may have few cheap healthy options nearby. A tax alone may also fail if people simply switch to other unhealthy products or if the food is still more convenient than cooking. Defining what counts as unhealthy is not always straightforward, either, and industry may argue that the rules are arbitrary.

For these reasons, I believe taxes should form one part of a wider approach. Governments should combine them with education campaigns, clearer labelling and support for affordable fresh food, so that people can actually act on better information.

In conclusion, a tax on unhealthy food and drink can improve public health by changing prices and funding services, and I support it, as long as it is not treated as the only solution.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
junk foodcheap, unhealthy food
public healththe health of the whole population
sugar taxtax on sugary drinks
obesity ratesshare of people who are very overweight
balanced dietfood with all nutrients in proportion
healthcare burdencost pressure on health services

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