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Compulsory weekly exercise: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu sağlıkla ilgili opinion essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Everyone should be required to do a minimum amount of exercise each week, either at school or at work.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Katılmak için gerekçeler

  • Reduces illness and healthcare costs
  • Many people are too busy or unmotivated otherwise
  • Builds lifelong habits

Katılmamak için gerekçeler

  • Forcing exercise infringes personal freedom
  • Some people have medical limitations
  • Motivation matters more than rules

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce the idea and state whether you agree
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Health and economic benefits of required exercise
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Freedom, practicality and effectiveness concerns
  4. 4SonuçConclude with a clear position, e.g. encourage rather than force

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (278 kelime)

It has been suggested that everyone should be required to take a minimum amount of exercise each week at school or work. While regular activity is clearly valuable, I disagree that it should be compulsory for adults, though I accept the case for schools.

The argument in favour rests on health and economics. Inactivity contributes to heart disease, diabetes and depression, and these conditions are expensive for health services and reduce productivity when employees are ill. If everyone had to exercise, the population would probably be fitter, absence from work would fall, and children would build habits that last into adulthood. Physical education in schools is already standard in most countries for this reason, and I believe it should remain mandatory for pupils, who are still developing both their bodies and their attitudes.

For adults, however, a legal requirement raises practical and ethical problems. Adults are entitled to make decisions about their own bodies, and forcing exercise on them would feel intrusive. It would be hard to monitor and enforce, particularly for people with disabilities, long-term illnesses or physically demanding jobs who may not need or be able to follow the same rules. Resentment could also make the policy counterproductive, since people tend to enjoy activity more when they choose it themselves.

A better approach is encouragement. Employers can offer gym memberships, walking meetings or time for lunchtime sport, and governments can build cycle lanes and cheap community facilities. Several companies that have introduced such schemes report higher morale and fewer sick days, which shows that voluntary incentives can work without any penalty.

In conclusion, exercise should be required for schoolchildren but only promoted, not enforced, among adults.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
physical activitymovement that exercises the body
sedentary jobsdesk-based jobs with little movement
personal freedomthe right to choose
chronic diseasea long-lasting illness
lifelong habitroutine kept through life
incentivereward that encourages action

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