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Corporate sports sponsorship: ide esai IELTS

Rencanakan esai positive or negative tentang globalisasi ini dengan ide dan kerangka di bawah, tulis dengan timer 40 menit, lalu bandingkan dengan contoh jawaban band 8.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Large international companies now sponsor sports events, athletes and teams all over the world.

Is this a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Positif

  • funds events and training
  • raises the profile of sports
  • creates jobs

Negatif

  • commercial interests dominate
  • children influenced by brand messages
  • unhealthy products promoted

Kerangka esai

  1. 1PendahuluanIntroduce sponsorship
  2. 2Paragraf isi 1Positive sides
  3. 3Paragraf isi 2Negative sides
  4. 4KesimpulanJudgement

Tulis dengan batas waktu

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Contoh jawaban band 8

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Tampilkan contoh jawaban (280 kata)

Large multinational companies now sponsor tournaments, teams and individual athletes around the world. I believe this is a mainly positive development, as long as sponsorship is regulated.

The strongest argument in its favour is funding. Sports events are expensive to stage, and many clubs and athletes could not survive without sponsors. Money from companies pays for stadiums, coaching and equipment, and it allows talented young people from poor families to train full time instead of working. The visibility sponsors provide also raises the profile of less popular sports, such as athletics or rowing, which attract public attention and television coverage mainly during major competitions. Finally, the commercial side of sport employs thousands of people, from event managers to security staff and sports scientists.

However, there are legitimate concerns. When sponsors contribute large sums, they can gain influence over decisions, such as the timing of matches or the format of competitions, so that the interests of profit come before those of players and spectators. Brand messages are also seen by children, who watch matches in shirts bearing company logos and may be encouraged to buy certain products. This is a particular problem when the sponsors sell unhealthy goods such as sugary drinks, fast food or alcohol, because they link these to fit and admired athletes.

These risks do not mean that sponsorship should be abandoned. Governments and sports bodies can limit advertising of harmful products, ban sponsorship deals that influence results and ensure that a fair share of income is invested in grassroots sport.

In conclusion, corporate sponsorship provides essential funding and exposure, and its drawbacks can be limited through sensible rules, so I regard it as more positive than negative.

Kosakata berguna

FrasaArti
sponsorpay to support an event for publicity
brandname and image of a product
commercial interestsdesire to make money
funding streamsource of money
television rightspermission to broadcast
endorsementpublic approval of a product

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