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Expensive weddings: ide esai IELTS

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WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Weddings and other family celebrations have become too extravagant and expensive, and families should spend less on them.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Alasan untuk setuju

  • debts after lavish weddings
  • pressure to impress guests
  • money better used for housing or education

Alasan untuk tidak setuju

  • celebrations mark important traditions
  • hospitality is a point of pride
  • guests and local businesses benefit

Kerangka esai

  1. 1PendahuluanIntroduce extravagant celebrations
  2. 2Paragraf isi 1Financial pressure and waste
  3. 3Paragraf isi 2Cultural value; compromise
  4. 4KesimpulanAgree that spending should be moderate

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Tampilkan contoh jawaban (280 kata)

Weddings and other family celebrations have become extremely extravagant, and some people argue that families should spend less on them. I agree with this view for several reasons.

The first reason is financial. Large weddings, with hundreds of guests, expensive venues and designer clothing, can cost as much as a deposit on a house. Many families borrow money or use their savings to pay for a single day, and young couples sometimes begin married life in debt. This is particularly hard for poorer families, who may feel obliged to match the standards of their neighbours in order to avoid shame. Social pressure and competition have turned celebrations into displays of status rather than expressions of joy. Social media intensifies this, as people compare their events with photographs of other lavish parties.

The second reason concerns the meaning of the occasion. The purpose of a wedding or birthday is to mark an important moment with the people closest to you, and this can be done without enormous spending. A smaller gathering allows the hosts to spend time with each guest and creates a more personal, relaxed atmosphere. Money that is saved could be used for something more lasting, such as education, a home or travel. Some countries have even introduced limits on the number of guests or the amount that can be spent, in order to protect families from financial strain.

Admittedly, celebrations are important parts of culture, and there is nothing wrong with spending a reasonable amount to honour tradition and to make memories.

In conclusion, extravagant celebrations create debt, social pressure and waste, while simpler events can be just as meaningful. I therefore agree that families should spend less.

Kosakata berguna

FrasaArti
lavishvery rich and expensive
get into debtowe money
social expectationswhat society thinks people should do
keep up appearancesshow a good image to others
cultural heritagetraditions passed down in a society
modest ceremonysimple, low-cost event

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