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Smartphones in school: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu eğitimle ilgili discussion essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that students should be allowed to use smartphones in school. Others believe they should be banned from classrooms.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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İki taraf için fikirler

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Birinci görüş

  • Phones are useful learning tools
  • Parents can contact children in emergencies
  • Students need to learn responsible use

İkinci görüş

  • Phones distract students from lessons
  • They enable cyberbullying and cheating
  • Classrooms should be a screen-free space

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce the debate and your position
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Reasons to allow phones
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Reasons to ban phones
  4. 4SonuçConclude with your opinion, e.g. restricted use in lessons

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

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Örnek cevabı göster (298 kelime)

Whether students should be allowed to use smartphones at school is hotly debated. Some people favour access, while others want a complete ban in classrooms. I will discuss both views and explain why I support restricted use.

Those who allow phones make several points. Smartphones are powerful learning tools, giving instant access to dictionaries, calculators and research materials, and many educational apps make revision more interactive. Parents also like to be able to contact their children, especially if they travel alone or there is an emergency. Some teachers add that learning to use technology responsibly is a life skill, and that banning phones simply postpones the lesson.

On the other hand, there are strong arguments for prohibition. Phones are a major distraction: notifications and social media tempt pupils away from the lesson, and studies suggest that results improve in schools that remove them. They can also be used for cheating in exams and for cyberbullying, which is difficult for staff to monitor. Moreover, break times can become silent as children look at screens instead of talking to each other, which affects their social development. France introduced a ban in its primary and middle schools for these reasons.

In my opinion, a total ban and unrestricted use are both extreme. The most sensible policy is to keep phones out of lessons unless the teacher asks for them for a specific task, and to store them in lockers or bags the rest of the time. Pupils could use them at lunchtime if they wish, and parents could still reach the school office in an emergency. This approach preserves educational value and removes most distractions.

In conclusion, smartphones offer benefits but also serious risks, so I believe schools should restrict their use rather than permit it freely or ban it entirely.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
classroom distractionsomething that takes attention from lessons
cyberbullyingonline harassment
educational appsoftware for learning
digital literacyability to use technology safely
school policyrules set by a school
academic dishonestycheating

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