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Skilled workers leaving home: IELTS essay fikirleri

Bu küreselleşmeyle ilgili problem and solution essay'ini aşağıdaki fikirler ve planla hazırla, 40 dakikalık sayaçla yaz, sonra band 8 örnek cevapla karşılaştır.

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Many highly educated professionals leave their home countries to work abroad, which is a problem for the countries they leave.

What are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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İki taraf için fikirler

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Sorunlar

  • higher wages abroad
  • better working conditions
  • limited opportunities at home

Çözümler

  • improve salaries and facilities
  • create attractive research jobs
  • incentives for returning home

Essay planı

  1. 1GirişIntroduce brain drain
  2. 2Gelişme paragrafı 1Causes
  3. 3Gelişme paragrafı 2Solutions
  4. 4SonuçMake staying attractive

Süreyle yaz

İlk birkaç dakikada plan yap, sonra yaz.

40:00

0 kelime (en az 250)

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Band 8 örnek cevap

Önce kendi cevabını yaz, sonra karşılaştır: örnek cevap tam olarak bu soruyu nasıl yanıtlıyor, her paragraf ne işe yarıyor ve hangi ifadeleri kendine alabilirsin.

Örnek cevabı göster (280 kelime)

Large numbers of well-qualified professionals, such as doctors, engineers and scientists, leave their home countries to work elsewhere. This essay will consider why this happens and what could be done to keep skilled people at home.

The main cause is pay. A nurse or software developer can earn several times more in Germany or the United States than in many developing countries, so the financial incentive to leave is powerful. Working conditions are also a factor. Hospitals and laboratories abroad often have modern equipment, reliable management and clear career paths, whereas at home professionals may face shortages, low status and political interference. In addition, some countries simply do not have enough opportunities for specialists; a talented researcher may find no suitable post or funding in the local universities.

Several measures could reduce this loss. Governments should raise salaries for essential professions and invest in hospitals, schools and laboratories, which would make jobs more attractive and productive. They could also create well-funded research posts and partnerships with international institutions, so that scientists can pursue ambitious projects without leaving. For those who have already gone, incentives to return might be effective, such as tax breaks, housing support or guaranteed positions. Several countries, including India and China, have launched programmes of this kind and persuaded many overseas graduates to come back. Finally, the length of time that people who receive publicly funded training must serve at home could be set by contract, though this should be carefully balanced with freedom of movement.

In conclusion, professionals emigrate chiefly because of better pay, better conditions and greater opportunity abroad. If countries improve these at home and encourage return, they can keep the skills they need.

Faydalı kelimeler

İfadeAnlamı
brain drainloss of skilled people to other countries
skilled professionalstrained experts
attract talentmake skilled people want to come
working abroadhaving a job in another country
returneeperson who comes back home
labour mobilityability of workers to move

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